《Viva La Vida》------Coldplay

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<DIV align=center><FONT face=楷体_GB2312 color=snow size=2>I used to rule the world</FONT></DIV>
<DIV align=center><FONT face=楷体_GB2312 color=snow size=2></FONT></DIV>
<DIV align=center><FONT face=楷体_GB2312 color=snow size=2>Seas would rise when I gave the word</FONT></DIV>
<DIV align=center><FONT face=楷体_GB2312 color=snow size=2></FONT></DIV>
<DIV align=center><FONT face=楷体_GB2312 color=snow size=2>Now in the morning I sleep alone</FONT></DIV>
<DIV align=center><FONT face=楷体_GB2312 color=snow size=2></FONT></DIV>
<DIV align=center><FONT face=楷体_GB2312 color=snow size=2>Sweep the streets I used to own</FONT></DIV>
<DIV align=center><FONT face=楷体_GB2312 color=snow size=2></FONT></DIV><BR>
<DIV align=center><FONT face=楷体_GB2312 color=snow size=2>I used to roll the dice</FONT></DIV>
<DIV align=center><FONT face=楷体_GB2312 color=snow size=2></FONT></DIV>
<DIV align=center><FONT face=楷体_GB2312 color=snow size=2>Feel the fear in my enemy's eyes</FONT></DIV>
<DIV align=center><FONT face=楷体_GB2312 color=snow size=2></FONT></DIV>
<DIV align=center><FONT face=楷体_GB2312 color=snow size=2>Listen as the crowd would sing:</FONT></DIV>
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<DIV align=center><FONT face=楷体_GB2312 color=snow size=2>"Now the old king is dead! Long live the king!"</FONT></DIV>
<DIV align=center><FONT face=楷体_GB2312 color=snow size=2></FONT></DIV><BR>
<DIV align=center><FONT face=楷体_GB2312 color=snow size=2>One minute I held the key</FONT></DIV>
<DIV align=center><FONT face=楷体_GB2312 color=snow size=2></FONT></DIV>
<DIV align=center><FONT face=楷体_GB2312 color=snow size=2>Next the walls were closed on me</FONT></DIV>
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<DIV align=center><FONT face=楷体_GB2312 color=snow size=2>And I discovered that my castles stand</FONT></DIV>
<DIV align=center><FONT face=楷体_GB2312 color=snow size=2></FONT></DIV>
<DIV align=center><FONT face=楷体_GB2312 color=snow size=2>Upon pillars of salt and pillars of sand</FONT></DIV>
<DIV align=center><FONT face=楷体_GB2312 color=snow size=2></FONT></DIV><BR>
<DIV align=center><FONT face=楷体_GB2312 color=snow size=2>I hear Jerusalem bells a ringing</FONT></DIV>
<DIV align=center><FONT face=楷体_GB2312 color=snow size=2></FONT></DIV>
<DIV align=center><FONT face=楷体_GB2312 color=snow size=2>Roman Cavalry choirs are singing</FONT></DIV>
<DIV align=center><FONT face=楷体_GB2312 color=snow size=2></FONT></DIV>
<DIV align=center><FONT face=楷体_GB2312 color=snow size=2>Be my mirror my sword and shield</FONT></DIV>
<DIV align=center><FONT face=楷体_GB2312 color=snow size=2></FONT></DIV>
<DIV align=center><FONT face=楷体_GB2312 color=snow size=2>My missionaries in a foreign field</FONT></DIV>
<DIV align=center><FONT face=楷体_GB2312 color=snow size=2></FONT></DIV><BR>
<DIV align=center><FONT face=楷体_GB2312 color=snow size=2>For some reason I can't explain</FONT></DIV>
<DIV align=center><FONT face=楷体_GB2312 color=snow size=2></FONT></DIV>
<DIV align=center><FONT face=楷体_GB2312 color=snow size=2>Once you go there was never,</FONT></DIV>
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<DIV align=center><FONT face=楷体_GB2312 color=snow size=2>never an honest word</FONT></DIV>
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<DIV align=center><FONT face=楷体_GB2312 color=snow size=2>That was when I ruled the world</FONT></DIV>
<DIV align=center><FONT face=楷体_GB2312 color=snow size=2></FONT></DIV><BR>
<DIV align=center><FONT face=楷体_GB2312 color=snow size=2>It was the wicked and wild wind</FONT></DIV>
<DIV align=center><FONT face=楷体_GB2312 color=snow size=2></FONT></DIV>
<DIV align=center><FONT face=楷体_GB2312 color=snow size=2>Blew down the doors to let me in</FONT></DIV>
<DIV align=center><FONT face=楷体_GB2312 color=snow size=2></FONT></DIV>
<DIV align=center><FONT face=楷体_GB2312 color=snow size=2>Shattered windows and the sound of drums</FONT></DIV>
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<DIV align=center><FONT face=楷体_GB2312 color=snow size=2>People couldn't believe what I'd become</FONT></DIV>
<DIV align=center><FONT face=楷体_GB2312 color=snow size=2></FONT></DIV><BR>
<DIV align=center><FONT face=楷体_GB2312 color=snow size=2>Revolutionaries wait</FONT></DIV>
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For my head on a silver plate</FONT></DIV>
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Just a puppet on a lonely string</FONT></DIV>
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Oh who would ever want to be king?</FONT></DIV>
<DIV align=center><FONT face=楷体_GB2312 color=snow size=2></FONT></DIV><BR>
<DIV align=center><FONT face=楷体_GB2312 color=snow size=2>I hear Jerusalem bells a ringing</FONT></DIV>
<DIV align=center><FONT face=楷体_GB2312 color=snow size=2></FONT></DIV>
<DIV align=center><FONT face=楷体_GB2312 color=snow size=2>Roman Cavalry choirs are singing</FONT></DIV>
<DIV align=center><FONT face=楷体_GB2312 color=snow size=2></FONT></DIV>
<DIV align=center><FONT face=楷体_GB2312 color=snow size=2>Be my mirror my sword and shield</FONT></DIV>
<DIV align=center><FONT face=楷体_GB2312 color=snow size=2></FONT></DIV>
<DIV align=center><FONT face=楷体_GB2312 color=snow size=2>My missionaries in a foreign field</FONT></DIV>
<DIV align=center><FONT face=楷体_GB2312 color=snow size=2></FONT></DIV><BR>
<DIV align=center><FONT face=楷体_GB2312 color=snow size=2>For some reason I can't explain</FONT></DIV>
<DIV align=center><FONT face=楷体_GB2312 color=snow size=2></FONT></DIV>
<DIV align=center><FONT face=楷体_GB2312 color=snow size=2>I know Saint Peter won't call my name
</FONT></DIV>
<DIV align=center><FONT face=楷体_GB2312 color=snow size=2></FONT></DIV>
<DIV align=center><FONT face=楷体_GB2312 color=snow size=2>Never an honest word
</FONT></DIV>
<DIV align=center><FONT face=楷体_GB2312 color=snow size=2></FONT></DIV>
<DIV align=center><FONT face=楷体_GB2312 color=snow size=2>But that was when I ruled the world</FONT></DIV>
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Chaosphinx的翻译作品：
Coldplay - Viva La Vida
Viva La Vida
生命万岁

I used to rule the world
Seas would rise when I gave the word
Now in the morning I sleep alone
Sweep the streets I used to own
大千世界曾由我主宰
巨浪也曾因我之命澎湃
而今我却在黎明独自入眠
在曾属于我的大道落寞徘徊

I used to roll the dice
Feel the fear in my enemy's eyes
Listen as the crowd would sing:
"Now the old king is dead! Long live the king!"
凡人生死曾由我主宰
尽情品味惊恐在死敌瞳孔绽开
欣然倾听百姓高歌喝彩：
“先王亡矣！新王万代！”

One minute I held the key
Next the walls were closed on me
And I discovered that my castles stand
Upon pillars of salt and pillars of sand
此刻我手握权位经脉
转瞬才知宫墙深似海
恍然发现我的城池
基底散如盐沙乱似尘埃

I hear Jerusalem bells a ringing
Roman Cavalry choirs are singing
Be my mirror my sword and shield
My missionaries in a foreign field
听那耶路撒冷钟声传来
罗马骑兵歌声震彻山海
担当我的明镜，利剑和盾牌
我的传教士屹立边疆之外

For some reason I can't explain
Once you go there was never,
never an honest word
That was when I ruled the world
只因一些缘由我无法释怀
一旦你离开这里便不再，
不再有逆耳忠言存在
而这便是我统治的时代

It was the wicked and wild wind
Blew down the doors to let me in
Shattered windows and the sound of drums
People couldn't believe what I'd become
凛冽邪风呼啸袭来
吹散重门使我深陷阴霾
断壁残垣礼崩乐坏
世人不敢相信我已当年不再

Revolutionaries wait
For my head on a silver plate
Just a puppet on a lonely string
Oh who would ever want to be king?
起义大军翘首期待
有朝一日我站上断头台
恰如傀儡随吊线寂寞摇摆
悲哉，谁又曾渴望万人膜拜？

I hear Jerusalem bells a ringing
Roman Cavalry choirs are singing
Be my mirror my sword and shield
My missionaries in a foreign field
听那耶路撒冷钟声传来
罗马骑兵歌声震彻山海
担当我的明镜，利剑和盾牌
我的传教士屹立边疆之外

For some reason I can't explain
I know Saint Peter won't call my name
Never an honest word
But that was when I ruled the world
只因一些缘由我无法释怀
我亦知天堂之门不会为我敞开
不再有逆耳忠言存在
但这却是我统治的时代

翻译心得：
《Viva La Vida》歌词如同旋律一般，铿锵有力，激情四射，但歌词的翻译过程却步履维艰。语句中随处可见的一些欧洲中世纪历史信息以及与基督教相关词语给翻译过程带来了很多困难，部分语句含义比较隐晦，只得在查阅一些资料后，才慢慢开始着手翻译工作。

在最终大功告成后，回头再看，不由赞叹Coldplay作品的磅礴与大气：一国之君人前的无上荣耀与背后的落寞孤独，以及当权位摇摇欲倾时的哀叹，Oh who would ever want to be king，都使自己久久陷入沉思。歌词所影射的国王（根据资料可能为路易十六），以及中国历史中的李后主、明熹宗，在某些方面令世人赞叹，但却只落得“昏君”二字，念及此，谁又会愿意为王呢。
王侯将相，不过凡人；生命不息，闪耀出生命最绚烂的色彩，足以不朽。

Viva La Vida，生命万岁。


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还有一个亮的翻译……

豆瓣贾妹儿译。

Viva la Vida
沃勒割去的生活

I used to rule the world
Seas would rise when I gave the word
Now in the morning I sleep alone
Sweep the streets I used to own
遥想当年，哥主宰世界
翻江倒海，放个p的事情
现在，哥独自无眠到天亮
寂寞无助扫大街。。

I used to roll the dice
Feel the fear in my enemy's eyes
Listen as the crowd would sing:
"Now the old king is dead! Long live the king!"
遥想当年，哥盾墙破釜
扛着boss不带颤
沐浴山呼：
苍天已死，黄天当道

One minute I held the key
Next the walls were closed on me
And I discovered that my castles stand
Upon pillars of salt and pillars of sand
曾几何时，哥刚搞清钥匙是哪只
怎料转身插错门
苦心经营几十年
一朝回到解放前

I hear Jerusalem bells a ringing
Roman cavalry choirs are singing
Be my mirror my sword and shield
My missionaries in a foreign field
For some reason I can't explain
Once you go there was never,
never an honest word
That was when I ruled the world

哥听到了耶路撒冷和尚在念经
罗马骑兵文工团在呻吟
你们是哥的照妖镜，你们是哥的折戟龙鳞
哥远去的勇士们啊
是因为不能说的秘密
自从你们离去
再也没有人对哥真心
这就是当年，哥当扛霸子的事情

It was the wicked and wild wind
Blew down the doors to let me in.
Shattered windows and the sound of drums
People couldn't believe what I'd become
YD的妖风啊
吹开门帘放我进
砸碎玻璃翻窗户，敲锣打鼓把哥迎
哥跟你说你都不信

Revolutionaries wait
For my head on a silver plate
Just a puppet on a lonely string
Oh who would ever want to be king?
城管等着银盘红烧狮子头
哥可怜兮兮只当腰带做头绳
啊西巴，谁想做老大一当好多年？

I hear Jerusalem bells a ringing
Roman Cavalry choirs are singing
Be my mirror my sword and shield
My missionaries in a foreign field
For some reason I can't explain
I know Saint Peter won't call my name
Never an honest word
But that was when I ruled the world

哥听到了耶路撒冷和尚在念经
罗马骑兵文工团在呻吟
你们是哥的照妖镜，你们是哥的折戟龙鳞
哥远去的勇士们啊
是因为不能说的秘密
我知道Peter三不会再call我
自从你们离去
再也没有真心
这就是当年，哥当扛霸子的事情

joyinjoy

【Steven点评】
法国资产阶级革命爆发后，路易十六与王后玛丽•安东尼特以里通外国的反革命罪和阴谋复辟罪被处以死
刑。临刑前他对着围观的群众大喊：“我清白死去。我原谅我的敌人，但愿我的血能平息上帝的怒火。”

行刑者查尔斯•亨里•桑松曾详细记录了路易十六被处死的前后。Coldplay用轻快异常的节奏，叙述了一段历史的苍凉，
反差强烈，意味十足。“我”也曾统治世界，也曾令敌人胆寒，而革命者洪水般来袭，致使昨天我还一言九鼎，
如今已成阶下之囚。Oh who would ever want to be king? 谁又想当王？我是那么不谙政治。于是我对国家和人民犯下
过错，圣人彼得自然不会为我开启天堂之门，而我的侍从们，一旦你们离去，也就再没有诚实可言，国
将不国，只有无奈。

从法国的中兴英主路易十四的穷奢极欲到路易十五的变本加厉，年代到了路易十六，国债已达十亿之巨
。如此局面，当然不可长保。

本期的冠军作品押韵、简练，无论是语言和对作品的理解都有独到之处。学习历史的Chris Martin给我
们出了难题，但如果不对历史和时态多加分析，翻译也只能留于表面，经不起推敲。看来我们的歌词翻
译是越来越有些意味了。

joyinjoy

这次制作的图片代码和播放器是抄鹤的，~~~~(>_<)~~~~ ，鱼自己制作的编码老是运行不良，预览模式里好好的，一贴出来就全乱套了。

solo

原帖由 joyinjoy 於 103131p://07e7 10:20 AM 發表。
这次制作的图片代码和播放器是抄鹤的，~~~~(>_<)~~~~ ，鱼自己制作的编码老是运行不良，预览模式里好好的，一贴出来就全&Egrave; ...

我没做个这样的，你太谦虚了不是？多谢美鱼介绍歌曲

纵横是会改变代码，鹤也没研究出适合的代码~~每次都弄好长时间，调试好就不再改，套了来用。

原帖由 joyinjoy 於 103131p://07e7 10:13 AM 發表。
还有一个亮的翻译……

豆瓣贾妹儿译。

Viva la Vida
沃勒割去的生活

I used to rule the world
Seas would rise when I gave the word
Now in the morning I sleep alone
Sweep the streets I used to own
遥想当年，哥主宰世界
翻江倒海，放个p的事情
现在，哥独自无眠到天亮
寂寞无助扫大街。。

这个翻译真的是很亮

Emma

你們都是高高高手啦
那些圖片都漂亮。

joyinjoy

原帖由 solo 於 2010-7-21 09:59 PM 發表。


我没做个这样的，你太谦虚了不是？多谢美鱼介绍歌曲

纵横是会改变代码，鹤也没研究出适合 ...

是抄 小石潭记 里面的图片代码，然后加工了一下。哎，看着还是不满意~~~~~

joyinjoy

原帖由 Emma 於 2010-7-21 10:35 PM 發表。
你們都是高高高手啦
那些圖片都漂亮。

是上次的哥特图片啦~~~

solo

原帖由 joyinjoy 於 043131p://07e7 04:00 AM 發表。


是抄 小石潭记 里面的图片代码，然后加工了一下。哎，看着还是不满意~~~~~

我就说呢，咋没做过这样的帖子~~~

我觉得把图片改成600——700像素估计你会满意的。

joyinjoy

原帖由 solo 於 2010-7-22 10:43 AM 發表。


我就说呢，咋没做过这样的帖子~~~

我觉得把图片改成600——700像素估计你会满意的。

嗯，随手写了400，等上传后才觉得有点小了。

solo

原帖由 joyinjoy 於 033131p://07e7 03:52 AM 發表。


嗯，随手写了400，等上传后才觉得有点小了。

嗯，那期待鱼儿下回的作品了

無鹽蛇蠍

呀
不依不依我不依
人家聽不見

solo

原帖由 無鹽蛇蠍 於 103131p://07e7 10:28 AM 發表。
呀
不依不依我不依
人家聽不見

耍赖皮呢……都听见啦，速度慢些。

無鹽蛇蠍

和著雨聲
沉醉

小雲兒

這帖子作的可真美啊